This is my story about waiwera it is a cool place when you get their and when you enter the the pool because you could see everything that is in my story and I am learning how to do descriptive language in my writing.
All I can say is I hope you like my story.
Waiwera Hot Pools!
In the holidays Mum, Dad, Sonny, Tim and I went to Waiwera Hot Pools. Mum pay for us then we went in.I was so happy First we went into the movie pools.It was nice and hot like as hot as the sun. Then I went into the green swirly slide It was twirly as a fidget spinner and I said because when I got to the end heaps of water flicked at me and I thought I was drowning but I wasn’t. it was freaky at first but I got yuste to it . I went down about 3 times then I went in to the outside pools.They were cool. There were water squirting up into the air like heaps of little particles in the air.I got a floaty and I was swimming around. Later on I went back into the movie pools and the lego batman was on. I said Then tim and sonny said come into the the outside pools “I whispered Yes”.
Then we went outside to go for a swim. We were playing rock boats and Tim Sonny and I had to jump on a floaty and we had to flip it and we would all fall into the water I was filled of joy my eyes popped out of my head and yelled with joy yes. When we were playing rock boats then I jumped on in the middle and then we fell. Tim was going to try to go down the slide with a floaty but the pool lady was coming around so tim quickly jumped off. Then we were playing rock boats again I was still amazed that game it was still the BEST.But it was like 8 o'clock at night it was a pretty long how it lasted and it was great. Then we were getting a bit board so we went back into the movie pool. When we jumped in it was as hot as a boiling pot. So I tried to get yuste to it and I did. Then I was swimming around for like an hour I kept nagging mum and dad saying “Can we go now but they said no so I yell “CAN WE GO NOW!” but they still said no.
Then dad yelled “We're off now boys”. “Yes we’re off home” We were getting changed in the changing room. Then I had to use tims towel because I left it at home NO! I don’t want to use this I screamed. Then I was changed we all were waiting for Sonny. When Sonny came out we went to the truck and we were off home.Back to kaikohe.
That was the best day of my live. It was great everything we did was great I really liked the green slide and the movie pool my best one ever would of been playing the rock boats that was a really I mean REALLY! cool game.
