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Bucket Filling
Firstly Imagine having a bucket sitting above your head.It is fill with love, happiness, and positive feelings. Everyone in the whole world has one. A Bucket Filler is a person who always treats people good and doesn’t put them down. They give positive comments, treat people with respect, support people in need.
One way you could fill someone's bucket is by telling them something nice about them. For instance, you could say “Hi” and introduce yourself if it’s someone new. If you see anyone, I mean anyone dipping someone’s bucket I would tell the teacher or tell the bullie to stop it.
Secondly, another way you can fill someone's bucket is to greet them. If you don’t and you say bad stuff about them then you are dipping someones bucket not filling. If you a dipping someones bucket that means you are a bully.But when you are a bucket filler then you will be a great person and you will have all the friends. Another example is when playing a game and they say “Can I play” Don’t ignore them you could say “Yes you can”.
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You use your bucket by saying positive comments and questions.You could say “You look nice”.
When trying to make a friend will show them happiness by smiling.You can show that your being supportive by supporting them. Just by saying “Go keep going and you will win”.
In summary, always be a bucket filler. Make friends, smile, show happiness, give sincere positive comments and be supportive to others. Fill their bucket up because when you do, yours will too.
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Total: R34 4a
