Let's Take Them Home!

This is my first persuasive writing. I was supported by Iverson. What do you think, did I persuade you?

Let's Take Them Home!

I think that we should bring home devices to school and use them in our learning environment. Are you with me?

 The first reason why I think we should take chromebooks home is because it will help us catch up on work and it will help us get our work finished on time.  When we take our chromebooks home normally they have to be payed off. But we think that if we take them home they will return back to school. Safe as bro! Plus we will be getting lots of work finished at home and be catching up a lot.

Another reason why I think we should be able to Take our chromebooks home is because if you miss a day because you're sick you can do your work at home. In other words When you're really sick your teacher can send your work and you can do it at home. So you can be on the right track.

In summary, I believe we should be able to take our chromebooks home my two main reasons are

It will help you catch up on your work. Added to this It will Motivate you. Who’s with me? LET'S TAKE THEM HOME!!

My next learning steps are:

Learn about emotive words and phrases and use them to make my argument better

Be able to use the correct for persuasive writing by myself (intro with opinion, main reasons and supporting detail, good connective and summary at the end)

Read my work to make sure it all makes sense.