My Writing

On your marks, Get set, GO.I was Sprinting in the front of everyone but then I got overtaken by John. Then Me, Sonny and Zeph were running partners but then Sonny ditched us so I had to ditch zeph and catch up to Sonny.I was running after him, but when I got a stitch from the apples I ate.I said to myself I'm so stupid I shouldnt  of ate those apples So, So, STUPID.But I caught up to Sonny boy and then I had a break again,then Sonny ditched me again so then I ran up the hill and down then I seen sonny and tried to sprint after him.Then Whea Gaylene said good work you two boys.After that we finished 1 lap.I was like yes that lap felt like forever.

Then I got around that corner were Matua Waitai is. Then I caught up to Sonny.I was having a little break with Sonny until I heard the footsteps of Zeph. I said  Zeph do you want to run with us. He said nothing and just ran and left us behind.I yelled “ WHY!!! ZEPH!!”. But Sonny Boy couldn’t take his fate so he ran and overtook Zeph.Then it was just me and I was running then jogging.Then I seen Whaea Gaylene again She said “Your goal is to catch up to Sonny boy and Zeph so just pace it up to them” I said “I will try”.

Then I was running then I seen Zeph and Sonny. Zeph was almost at the finish line Sonny boy was all ready over. So I sprinted after him I was ready to overtake him but he made it over the finish line.I was right behind him. But I was lucky to make it to the Ohaeawai .Because it isn’t about First Second Third it’s about time.

In Conclusion I done great because I caught up to Zeph and I was far far away and I'm just glad that it’s over.Because I felt like it was going to take forever FOREVER!!!.