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Friday, October 14, 2016

This is my rhyming words about Animals.

2 comments:

  1. Hi Sweyde, I really love this poem. You were successful at using assonance to write a poem about animals. I would have liked to see you using the Smart Learner Framework to make this post a real quality post. I see you are still unsure about using the homophones there, their and they're. Are you able to see the mistakes in the poem? If so, I would like you to fix them.

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  2. Hi Sweyde, I really love this poem. You were successful at using assonance to write a poem about animals. I would have liked to see you using the Smart Learner Framework to make this post a real quality post. I see you are still unsure about using the homophones there, their and they're. Are you able to see the mistakes in the poem? If so, I would like you to fix them.

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